Sol's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sadness[Beautiful Song]]

Very nice.

Sounds clean and fluent with progression. No random instruments jumping which is good (perfectly transitioned) and very nice chord and melody. The volume of every note is perfectly well done! Why would you want a dubstep version, it's perfect how it is now! :C

The fade out ending works perfectly which this kind of music...there isn't much you can do with effects with this kind of music. The only other thing I can think of is a piano transitioning out which is over used, too! So yeah~get used to it @TheDoor6.

(No, I cannot make dubstep...sorry!)

Vernam responds:

Glad you like it!!!

[.X. DOTA (-Remastered-)]

V

Stop reading wiki pedia.

This is Dota, Daddy DJ was a fun remake of Dota.

[Stay Inside Me]

I thought the title meant "Stay inside me" as in the person's heart. XD

OcularNebula responds:

you're not wrong. it has a double meaning

[Snow Fall - Piano]

@Acoustatic

Nope, not even close sounding like a MIDI piano sound...

Sounds more real!

Great job. c:

[FS: Chance to See]

Pretty...love it!

FairSquare responds:

Thanks :)

[Skavemen: Searching]

It's not bad!!

00:20 that was not a pretty sound.

00:28 good!!! Love those vowels, and I love the sound. :)

00:39 some one was off pitch...:c

00:47 when you're singing the word searching, it sounds kinda funny. :/

00:55 that rock voice is pretty<3

1:20 it gotten a little bit when you said searching. :c

Overall score

3.5 :) Good demo track, better than mine. :b

You have energy, confidence, and just fun. People would DEFIANTLY stay at this concert and pay for it, too. There were spots where you missed up pitching, but you can omit them. :):)

[The Dragon's Honor]

Professionally done, good job!

When can I see you in concerts? XD

SilverPoyozo responds:

Thank you!

Well, I can only hope for now... xD

[The Puppet Lord]

Amazing! It sounds creapy~:)

DuttonsaysHi responds:

Thank you! That's exactly the vibe I was going for :3

[Fires]

You have a good voice, however, you messed up on pitches a lot...

I have some strategies that could help...

First: While practicing, make sure you feel the vibration between your voice and your note...if you feel the vibration your mind will let you know if it matches. You'll want to get louder, and have a good feeling about that note. <---THIS HELPED ME A LOT!

Second: If you have trouble memorizing a note...make a track with the melodies built in, and then place the vocal over the empty track. Make sure you have good headphones and a good microphone that reveals your voice, and is loud enough to hear the matching...It kind of vibrates, it's hard to describe, it's more like a "in-body" vibration... <---That's how I recorded my track It's The Way.

Third: Using your face helps, too! Sometimes it's hard catching a note that isn't in your normal range, a note that is usually out of your range requires you to raise your eyebrows...raising your eyebrows is a technique that helps your voice into your "head-voice"...if you want a lower range use your chin and gently put it down a little.

Fourth: Keep your neck still...this will cause less "stressed muscle" in your neck and allowing the vibration straightly spin out of your throat causing the best sound possible (if you're in the right position).

Fifth: Do not slouch, slouching is a slap in the face....XD Slouching doesn't allow your lung capacity to expand like it's suppose to for singing...YOU WANT YOUR RIBS TO HAVE A GAP! Make sure you don't loose your expanding ribs, keep the expanded even while loosing air...

Six: Vowels...Vowels is a common issue, there is actually a class about this... Why have correct vowels? Because vowels keeps that air spinning perfectly! If you have trouble with this, just use normal vowels...You don't have to go crazy like most pop singers do! But it would be nice to give a spice...When I want some spice, I kinda grunt a vowel at the beginning. Like in my song It's The Way, I do a hard sound on it. (You don't really have this problem).

Seventh: Annunciations...EASY! Force your beginning letter to the end. This is important...(You don't have a problem except when you say Fire...You need the that "FU" sound, and when you said "Film" it sounded more like ilm (kids would have trouble on what you meant) just make sure you force it there, make it obvious, it won't loose your pitch...Trust me!!! :)

Overall, sounded like a demo track!

Please make a proper one~I wanna hear more...PLEASE! :)

Draewa responds:

Haha, let me clear something up here: I did not sing this track. I'm a dude, and my voice is terrible. I just produced the track. The vocals are from a sample pack I bought somewhere. I noticed that the pitch is messed up in places, but I didn't bother to correct every single note since this is just a quick (and shoddy) production; A friend asked me to produce Trance, and I tried.
Nonetheless. thanks for your time ;) Who knows, maybe one day I'll pick up a mic and try to sing.

[{Runaway}]

Hello!

It's not bad, but I heard better to be honest (not to sound like a hater)...

Although this song is popular, there is some things wrong with the audio. 1:52 your song is not mastered, listen closely you can hear the audio knocking out of the wavelength.

2:01 no transitioning, it sound weird going into it...

It's incorrect around 1:50, for it needs to be 4 lengths of repeating not 3.

It has a good melody, but it gets really annoying because it's TOO repetitive. The same thing over and over that lasts too long...

Honestly, I think people just really liked the melody in this song not the producing work...it could use some fixing! You should be happy for the melody you've created!

It's not bad at all, it's actually cool. Just some errors that need fixing. :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

Fuck off you fucking piece of shit. I literally spent so much time on this and you fucking rip it apart. If I EVER catch you listening to another of my songs I swear to god